I enjoyed the track, it has good energy and is certainly propulsive. It's not music I often listen to so I can't comment in any great depth, but I can see people moshing away to this (or at least vigorously nodding their heads). I'm not a technical guy but the cymbals seem kinda ringy, swooshy sounding at times, I don't know what that means though. I think the bass is a bit low in the mix - I had to turn up the bass on my sub a bit to hear some of the interesting stuff that you were playing around the minute mark. But then again, you are asking a bass player for his opinion about how much bass there should be in a mix, perhaps not the best type of person to ask Song sounds tight and well rehearsed. Good work, I say.