Dunno,
1. Not enough chatter at the beginning of the video.
2. Very poor on the clickbait graphics for the thumbnail which will appear on YT.
3. The whole thing is put together in a way that we can just focus on the sound. You need to be putting more distractions in.
You are going to have go back to the editing board if your desire to be a global influencer will ever be realised.
However, as a video showing how cool the Ehrlund is though, it is excellent :) Thanks.