[quote name='endorka' post='1066469' date='Dec 22 2010, 09:29 AM']I'd say you've achieved the mood you are after. If I were to offer constructive criticism, I would prefer to hear the melody unharmonised and perhaps in a higher register; in my opinion, the bass chords sound quite cumbersome and are not really in keeping with the effect you are trying to achieve.
Jennifer[/quote]
thanks Jennifer, will experiment with some higher register