October Composition Challenge ---starts here

[skankdelvar]

A dab behind the ears with some eau de Canvey. (Edit: Better version further down the page).

 

 

 

Lyrics ↓

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Sitting At The Bottom Of The Sea
 

I got myself a date and she was pretty
she said come up here and meet me in the city
Be still my beating heart but my stupid car won't start
I guess I'm gonna have to take the train

but I ran into a hitch when the train went off a bridge
Now I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
 

I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
Why does this keep happening to me
I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
 

Solo
 

Conductor came around collecting tickets
I stood right up and told him where to stick it
He said 'Hey what's the fuss? We'll be laying on a bus,
here's the trolley have a lovely cuppa tea"

But I'm anticipating that my pretty date ain't waiting
while I'm sitting on a train at the bottom of the sea
 

I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
Why does this keep happening to me
I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
 

Solo
 

I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
This really isn't where I wanna be
I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea
x2

 

I'm anticipating that my pretty girl ain't waiting
while I'm sitting at the bottom of the sea

 

Edited October 25, 2021 by skankdelvar

[lurksalot]

voting is up 

 

 

 

Apologies to anyone hanging till to this evening , but I've just realised that I am taking Mrs Lurks away for a couple of days.

This means i wont have my computer access and I cant do this on my phone. 

[lurksalot]

12 hours ago, upside downer said:

Tally Ho, here's my 3 minutes worth for this month.

 

 

 

 

brilliant !

[lurksalot]

9 hours ago, skankdelvar said:

A dab behind the ears with some eau de Canvey.

 

 

Bravo sir, bravo!

[skankdelvar]

8 hours ago, lurksalot said:

 

Bravo sir, bravo!

Thank you, kind sir.

 

The missus reckoned I'd mastered it too loud so here's a cleaner (?) version just for the record, no need to change the voting version.

 

 

[lurksalot]

13 minutes ago, skankdelvar said:

Thank you, kind sir.

 

The missus reckoned I'd mastered it too loud so here's a cleaner (?) version just for the record, no need to change the voting version.

 

 

Defo ‘cleaner’ but bring those vocals up , or EQ them so they cut through a bit more . 
 

that’s a general thing though , I think we are all too shy with our lyrics , let’s hear them 👍

 

 

but it’s still a doozy of a toon  😎

[skankdelvar]

4 minutes ago, lurksalot said:

Defo ‘cleaner’ but bring those vocals up

 

Yep, needs more work but there's never enough time. 

 

Have a lovely time with the missus and send us a postcard 

[lurksalot]

Wish you were here 😁