A Thousand Tears (my new song)

[Basszilla]

Hi all 

 

Here is my latest song 'A thousand tears'. I played everything and mixed and mastered it. 

 

I hope you enjoy 😊

 

Listen to 1000 Tears by INSTANT DISMISSAL on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/hMmjC

 

 

Edited December 3, 2021 by Basszilla

[neepheid]

Just had a listen to your track - I enjoyed it.  The vocal stuck out to me - you sound a bit like Ozzy if he had done less drugs, and I mean that as a compliment.  The bongos were a nice touch at the end.  It's a good mix, you've made a balanced track where everything can be heard.

 

At times I was hoping that the bass and the guitar didn't seem so rigidly stuck to one another melodically - that's OK for some of the time when you're driving a portion of the song home but I would have liked the bass and the guitar to decouple at times and do something a bit different from each other - still complementing each other of course.  Or maybe I don't get it, it's just my opinion.  This is the first time in a while I've listened critically to a piece of music so I'm a bit rusty in the whole delivering feedback thing.

 

Overall though, I enjoyed your track, and thanks for sharing it.

[Basszilla]

Thanks for the feedback @neepheid