Jezyorkshire Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qv_cwyA-PoQ"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qv_cwyA-PoQ[/url] This is my 12 year old sons first composition with some accompaniement from me on the big bass, any comments welcome on either of us or as a whole or whatever, hope you like it, cheers, Jez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bassace Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 Good start, Marley. One day you'll be so famous you will have your own camera man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legion Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 I like it Jez! and it made me miss the old double bass *sniffle* Keep up the composing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ardi100 Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 Nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waynepunkdude Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 Excellent work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TPJ Posted July 21, 2009 Share Posted July 21, 2009 Nice one Jez. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Major-Minor Posted July 21, 2009 Share Posted July 21, 2009 Well done ! If that is your first effort, you should be very proud. If there is one thing i think you should think about, its the idea of contrast. If you can come up with something else that's maybe in the same tempo, but perhaps in a contrasting key, and maybe with a change of rhythmic emphasis, you could slot it in halfway to give the piece a lift - or the other trick is to play the same music but in a different key (maybe a semitone higher ? for instance). Composition is a very personal thing - and I wouldn't want to sound as if I am being critical - far from it - I think you show great promise. But if you are going to take composition to the next stage, you need to look at what all the great writers do. And in most cases. its that notion of contrasting one idea with another that will take you forward in your development. Keep up the good work ! Try to write something - however short - every day. Composing takes practice just like learning an instrument. The Major Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnny dissident Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 Really nice, I love the build up of intensity toward the end, yea keep them coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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